Thursday, June 19, 2014

screenplay : gladiator

After Commodus leaves the arena, feeling humilliated and ashamed of himself, he goes inside and talks to one of his advisers to find a way to solve this problem...
Commodus: I can't believe what they made me do... I would've killed him right there!

Adviser: But Sir... You did what you had to do to avoid everyone hating you or even doing a rebellion for killing their "hero".
Commodus: I know... But it made me look weak, it made them realize they could control me.

Adviser: Don't worry about that, they haven't done anything yet and they won't...

Commodus: I already know that but how can I make them respect me? They should fear me, I can kill them if I want... But today they were controlling me, that's not how Rome works! The Emperor controlling the people is the right thing...

Adviser: You can't kill him, that would just make everyone angry, it can compromise your life, if you want to do something, you must set it up so it looks like something you didn't plan, an "accident", maybe a battle between slaves where you order everyone to kill him, he will die in battle and no one will know you planned it.

Commodus: Actually... It is a good plan, I just need to set things up and I wouldn't have to kill him... No one will think it was me... So there will be no rebellion, great idea... I will start planning everything right now so it is done as soon as possible.

Commodus leaves.

Wednesday, June 18, 2014

E-petition

Ban the homework in the blogs that miss Carla gives class
Responsible department: English Department
I think that miss carla gives too much homework in the blog, that is bad because she steals time of our lives that we could study or doing sport.


Technology story

I hate this city roads, said Carlos triying to make the landscape in the darkness as her husband jungi drive
Having work all week, Carlos and Jungi were looking forward to there weekend Carlos and Jungi were looking forward to their weekend away. Was a long drive for a friday evening, but they would soon arrives to the holiday cottage. Mr.Rolo the farmer that owned the cottage, was to met them there with the key. After 10 metres, turn right ordered the GPS . Im sure we should go left said Carlos. but jungi doesnt hear him. Turning the wheel to the left, the car bumped on a rock. There was a splash, and the car swerve before coming to a halt.
I knew the GPS was bad said Carlos, Jungi tried to start the car but the engime was dead. What were they going to do? They couldnt even open the car dor because the water will go in the car. Carlos take her phone of her pocket and tried  to cLl Mr.rRoƱo, there was no signal. At the moment, there was a loud tap on the window. Carlos screamed and dropped her phone. A smiling face appeared at the window. Mr and Mr Oyapark? Im Mr.Rolo, I have been expectating you. Most of the visitors from london follow their GPS into the river !

Monday, June 9, 2014

Educreations letter and rationale

http://www.educreations.com/lesson/view/bloody-sunday-rationale/22493042/?s=OkjxIJ&ref=app
RATIONALE


http://www.educreations.com/lesson/view/bloody-sunday-protest-letter/21626442/?s=NgLIkY&ref=app
LETTER

Sunday, June 1, 2014

Rationale

 I wrote a protest letter about the victims of Bloody Sunday in Northern Ireland. It was written with an accusative_ tone and hopes to address the Prime Minister. In my letter,  I tried to present my point of  view  with phrase like “they were just protesting and that is a civil right” and “the english must gave more help to the families of the people killed”. I tried as well to use a sophisticated level of vocabulary with words like civil rights and  polotical action” finally I tried to use complex structures like one might see in a higher level publication such as The New York Times with sentences like “you treated them like dogs with aids and going against civil rights would be like a dicatatorship”. Using these elements I feel I reached my purpose set out in the task. This task addresses the topic “Taking a Stand”  and specially addresses the topic of the abuse of power. I think  a letter of protest helped me to  best express what I learned from the topics we studied in this unit and how I feel about them